I don\'t want to be famous
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t want to be famous at my school. I feel uncomfortable when someone pay attention to me. Famous people receive lots of attention from lots of people, that\'s why I don\'t want to be famous. I take granted for people has feeling that want to boast something or be famous. Though I have that same feeling, but I\'m so uncomfortable when lots of people pay attention to me, in conclusion I don\'t want to be famous person.
(P.S. Do you know your MBTI?)
강사 첨삭
I don\'t want to be famous at my school.
>> This is a good sentence.
(P.S. Do you know your MBTI?)
I feel uncomfortable when someone pay attention to me.
>> I feel uncomfortable when someone pays attention to me.
Famous people receive lots of attention from lots of people, that\'s why I don\'t want to be famous.
>> This is a good sentence.
I take granted for people has feeling that want to boast something or be famous.
>> I ignore people who are boastful or famous.
Though I have that same feeling, but I\'m so uncomfortable when lots of people pay attention to me, in conclusion I don\'t want to be famous person.
>> I feel so uncomfortable when lots of people pay attention to me. In conclusion, I don\'t want to be a famous person.
(P.S. Do you know your MBTI?)
- Hi, Daniel, I\'m afraid I don\'t. Do you know yours? Please tell me about it tomorrow.
Thank you for taking the time to do your homework.
- Teacher Debbie
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