I don\'t want to change it.

2024-01-02 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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If the meaning of switching seats with celebrities means a job, I don\'t want to change it. I don\'t want to worry about privacy like celebrities, I want to meet people I want to meet freely and do whatever I want to say and do I think celebrities will be too stressed out.

강사 첨삭

Hi Da [이름], 

Your perspective on not wanting to switch seats with celebrities makes a lot of sense. It\'s true that privacy concerns and the constant scrutiny can be challenging. Choosing the freedom to meet people and express yourself without the added stress is a valuable perspective. Wishing you a life full of freedom and genuine connections! 

~Teacher Cathy 

 

If the meaning of switching seats with celebrities means a job, I don\'t want to change it. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>If swapping seats with celebrities refers to their job, I don\'t want to switch. 

I don\'t want to worry about privacy like celebrities, I want to meet people I want to meet freely and do whatever I want to say and do 

>>I don\'t want to worry about privacy like celebrities; I want to meet people I want to meet freely and say and do whatever I want. 

I think celebrities will be too stressed out. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>Celebrities are likely to experience excessive stress. 

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