I don\'t want to see things on social media that you don\'t like.

2024-10-21 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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There are many reasons why social media has developed quickly and greatly, but I think the main point is that it has made it easy and quick to consume the content that users want. That\'s why I don\'t just watch most of it unless it\'s cognitive, useful, or must-see content. I\'m just putting up with the news and social benefits or things I feel I really need but don\'t want to see.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

Thanks for sharing your thoughts about social media! You make a good point about how it’s become easy to find content we like. It\'s smart to focus on what’s useful and meaningful to you. It’s okay to skip the stuff that doesn’t sit well with you. Creating a feed that feels right for you is important. Keep being mindful of what you choose to see!

~Teacher Cathy

 

There are many reasons why social media has developed quickly and greatly, but I think the main point is that it has made it easy and quick to consume the content that users want.

>>CORRECT

OR>>There are many reasons why social media has developed rapidly and significantly, but I believe the main point is that it has made it easy and quick for users to consume the content they want.

That\'s why I don\'t just watch most of it unless it\'s cognitive, useful, or must-see content.

>>CORRECT

OR>>That\'s why I usually avoid most of it unless it\'s cognitive, useful, or essential content.

I\'m just putting up with the news and social benefits or things I feel I really need but don\'t want to see.

>>CORECT

OR>>That\'s why I typically skip most of it unless it\'s cognitive, useful, or must-see content.

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