I enjoy movies from my own country.
학생이 쓴 원문
Because I like my own country. And if I watch Korean movie, I think that I will understand its\' contents well. And when I watch movie,my mom tells us to watch movie in English. But in korea movie ,the picture is Korean so I could understand better. And when there is korean in Korea movie, I feel little bit good. and when i watch korea movie i feel friendly. that is why i like korea movies.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Lucas!^^
Thank you for doing your homework. It\'s a good practice for your writing and grammar skills. You have grammar error, but you can improve by practicing your skills regularly. Anyway, you can always practice your corrections so that you will be more confident in the future. Have a great weekend!^_^
Because I like my own country.
>>> I enjoy movies from my own country because I like my own country.
And if I watch Korean movie, I think that I will understand its\' contents well.
>>>If I watch a Korean movie, I think will understand its contents well.
And when I watch movie,my mom tells us to watch movie in English.
>>>And when I watch movies, my mom tells me to watch movies in English.
But in korea movie ,the picture is Korean so I could understand better.
>>> But in Korean movies, the pictures are in Korean, so I could understand better.
And when there is korean in Korea movie, I feel little bit good. and when i watch korea movie i feel friendly.
>>>If the movie is in Korean, I feel a little bit good and when I watch Korean movies, I feel friendly.
that is why i like korea movies.
that is why i like korea movies.
>>>That is why I like Korean movies more.
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