I expect my country want to be just society.

2014-05-01 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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That's a difficult question to answer. But I expect my country want to be just society. That means people have equal opportunity on social security, education, culture life. And that means people can criticize some faults and have to can accept modestly that criticism. So anybody have to speak, debate and discuss freely.

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Hello Miss. [Name]! Thank you for doing your homework even if you find it difficult. Thank you for your patience. Keep on learning and study more vocabularies. Have a good day!~KELLY~ That\'s a difficult question to answer. >> Correct.But I expect my country want to be just society.>> Did you mean:  But I expect my country to be like the society where I am living now. That means people have equal opportunity on social security, education, culture life.>>That means people have equal opportunities on social security, education and culture and life.And that means people can criticize some faults and have to can accept modestlythat criticism. >> People can criticize constructively and accept it modestly.So anybody have to speak, debate and discuss freely. >> So anyone can speak and voice out their opinions freely.

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