I extended my lecture.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Shy!
It was hectic day yesterday. So I was late writing my composition.
Today, having a break for minutes, I am writing early.
I've been with you for six times in my class.
Even though it is pretty short time,
I have had deep satisfaction with it.
Furthermore I'm familiar with this lecture.
Thus I exrended lecture period to four months.
Please teach me a lot. Thank you!
Can you tell me next composition subject? bye~
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! It was a great pleasure that you extended your class for another four months. I am glad that you are willing to learn and that you appreciate what I teach you. Rest assured that I will teach you a lot of things. Thank you so much! Take care! ^_^
For your next topic, I want you to answer this question: "What is your best childhood memory?"
See you in class!
Shy
Hi, Shy!
>> Hi Shy!
It was hectic day yesterday. So I was late writing my composition.
>> I had a hectic schedule yesterday so I did not finish my composition on time.
Today, having a break for minutes, I am writing early.
>>I have a 5 minute break so I am writing a composition now.
I've been with you for six times in my class.
>> I had class with you for six times already
Even though it is pretty short time, I have had deep satisfaction with it.
>> I had a good time and I was satisfied even if our class lasted for a short span of time.
Furthermore I'm familiar with this lecture.
>> I can also say that I am already familiar with this lecture.
Thus I exrended lecture period to four months.
>> And because of that, I extended my class for another four months.
Please teach me a lot. Thank you!
>> Correct
Can you tell me next composition subject? bye~
>> Can you tell me the topic for the next composition? Bye!
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