I extended my lecture.

2010-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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Hi, Shy! It was hectic day yesterday. So I was late writing my composition. Today, having a break for minutes, I am writing early. I've been with you for six times in my class. Even though it is pretty short time, I have had deep satisfaction with it. Furthermore I'm familiar with this lecture. Thus I exrended lecture period to four months. Please teach me a lot. Thank you! Can you tell me next composition subject? bye~

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Hi [이름]! It was a great pleasure that you extended your class for another four months. I am glad that you are willing to learn and that you appreciate what I teach you. Rest assured that I will teach you a lot of things. Thank you so much! Take care! ^_^ For your next topic, I want you to answer this question: "What is your best childhood memory?" See you in class! Shy   Hi, Shy! >> Hi Shy! It was hectic day yesterday. So I was late writing my composition. >> I had a hectic schedule yesterday so I did not finish my composition on time. Today, having a break for minutes, I am writing early. >>I have a 5 minute break so I am writing a composition now. I've been with you for six times in my class. >> I had class with you for six times already Even though it is pretty short time, I have had deep satisfaction with it. >> I had a good time and I was satisfied even if our class lasted for a short span of time. Furthermore I'm familiar with this lecture. >> I can also say that I am already familiar with this lecture. Thus I exrended lecture period to four months. >> And because of that, I extended my class for another four months. Please teach me a lot. Thank you! >> Correct Can you tell me next composition subject? bye~ >> Can you tell me the topic for the next composition? Bye!

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