I feel like....

2015-11-27 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

I feel like bird. It's morning now. In the mornings, I can have free time. Beacause my kids go to the school. I ususally enjoy my own time in the mornings except when I have to do something special.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thanks for your composition today! That\'s the good thing about stay-at-home moms. You can enjoy mornings when all your family member have gone out for work or school. Well, I hope you\'ll enjoy the rest of the day. Take care always! T. [이름] ^^ I feel like bird. >> I feel like I\'m a bird.  It\'s morning now. >> Correct In the mornings, I can have free time. Beacause my kids go to the school. >> In the morning, I can have some free time because my kids go to school.  I usually enjoy my own time in the mornings except when I have to do something special. >> Correct

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