I feel tired.

2010-02-19 · 첨삭 강사 joy

학생이 쓴 원문

It's very cold today. The cellcius degree is minus one. And there are strong wind. On last week, our president asked us to make a book. He maked the name of book. It's "Use of Drug". So everyon in department should make a manuscript by turns. First, one person takes one pharmaceutical molecule. Therefore I search the paper and surf the related webpage. I work in product development department. But I feel like I work in publishing company. Anyway, I feef tired.ㅜㅠ

강사 첨삭

Hey there [이름], happy Friday..^^wow, your project is hard, I've never done that before, making a book,^^ but I think the topic is really good, it's very informational. You can do It! just be patient.kkk^^ anyway you have your groupmates that can help you to make the job easier.goodluck!   T.Joy   It's very cold today. >>>correct The cellcius degree is minus one. And there are strong wind. >>>The temperature is negative one and the wind is so strong.On last week, our president asked us to make a book. >>>Last week, our president asked us to make a book.  He maked the name of book. It's "Use of Drug". So everyon in department should make a manuscript by turns. >>>He asked us to make a book entitled "Use of Drugs" so everyone in the department should make a manuscript by turns.  First, one person takes one pharmaceutical molecule. >>>First, one person must take one pharmaceutical molecule.Therefore I search the paper and surf the related webpage. >>>Therefore I searched for the paper and surf the internet.I work in product development department. But I feel like I work in publishing company. >>>I am working in the product development department but I feel like I'm working in the publishing department.Anyway, I feef tired. >>>correctㅜㅠ

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