I feel upset
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HI [이름]
Good day!
It is really nice to work on the task as soon as you can do it.
You have to be flexible at times especially if your boss is the one who ordered it,
Always make sure that you give your best shot.
Have a great day! Thanks again for your time.
Teacher Nina
When I want the task over soon, I order it or ask other person do it.
>> When I want a task to be done, I ask another person to do it.
but if other person put off the work, I will feel upset.
>> But if that person put off the work, I will feel upset.
It is very rude if the person who is asking is your boss.
>> It is very rude if the person who is asking is your boss.
Yes It is reasonable to postphone the task when we have urgent task.
>> Yes, it is reasonable to postpone the task when we have an urgent thing to do.
>> OR: It is reasonable to postpone it when we have an urgent thing to do.
even in this cast, we should get a favor from them(If we were asked)
>> Did you mean: Even this case, we should ask a favor from them.
In a big company like apple, the structure of task needs lots of time.
>> Correct ( Capitalization: Apple ^^)
>> OR: In a big company such as Apple, the task needs a lot of time.
the portion of the job is making a perfect job, is meaning that there is no task that is not important.
>> That simple task makes into a perfect one, it just means that there is no task that isn\'t important.
because it makes all process late.
>> Because it makes the process a bit late.
>> OR: Because it makes the process be a bit behind from the set date.
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