I feel your pain
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Dear [이름],
Happy Wednesday!
When you are going through a lot of problems it is important to have a friend to comfort you. Even if that friend can\'t help you solve the problem his/her mere presence will greatly help. I know that from experience since I\'ve been through a lot in life. See you later.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
People is very important to feel the pain of someone else.
>>It is important for people to feel the pain of someone.
Because man is social animal, and we cannot live alone.
>>Because man is a social animal and we cannot live alone.
Also we can understand other people that we should feel other\'s pain.
>> Also we can understand other people if we could feel their pain.
As the Korean proverb said \"If we divide up the pain, it diminishes the fewer.
>> As the korean proverb say, \"If we divide the pain it diminishes\".
If we divide up the happiness, it adds the more.\"
>> If we share happiness, it adds more.
I have ever felt other\'s pain.
>> I have felt others pain.
When my friend\'s parent was dead, I comforted him to come his house.
>> When my friend\'s parents died, I comforted him in his home.
When he lost his job, I bought him a meal and alcohol.
>>correct!
We live in community.
>>We live in one community.
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