I feel your pain

2016-06-15 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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People is very important to feel the pain of someone else. Because man is social animal, and we cannot live alone. Also we can understand other people that we should feel other's pain. As the Korean proverb said "If we divide up the pain, it diminishes the fewer. If we divide up the happiness, it adds the more." I have ever felt other's pain. When my friend's parent was dead, I comforted him to come his house. When he lost his job, I bought him a meal and alchol. We live in community.

강사 첨삭

Dear [이름],

Happy Wednesday!

When you are going through a lot of problems it is important to have a friend to comfort you. Even if that friend can\'t help you solve the problem his/her mere presence will greatly help. I know that from experience since I\'ve been through a lot in life. See you later.

Take care!

~T. Lynn

 

People is very important to feel the pain of someone else.

>>It is important for people to feel the pain of someone.

Because man is social animal, and we cannot live alone.

>>Because man is a social animal and we cannot live alone.

Also we can understand other people that we should feel other\'s pain.

>> Also we can understand other people if we could feel their pain.

As the Korean proverb said \"If we divide up the pain, it diminishes the fewer.

>> As the korean proverb say, \"If we divide the pain it diminishes\".

If we divide up the happiness, it adds the more.\"

>> If we share happiness, it adds more.

I have ever felt other\'s pain.

>> I have felt others pain.

When my friend\'s parent was dead, I comforted him to come his house.

>> When my friend\'s parents died, I comforted him in his home.

When he lost his job, I bought him a meal and alcohol.

>>correct!

We live in community.

>>We live in one community.

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