I felt really proud of me when I am thinking of my bicycle because it gives me a merit.
학생이 쓴 원문
Proud is important to personal life.
I have my own car.
And I have also a motorcycle which is small.
I am proud of them.
Becuase I am very enjoyable to ride them.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
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Proud is important to personal life.
>> Being proud is important.
>> Being proud is important.
I have my own car.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
And I have also a motorcycle which is small.
>> I also have a small motorcycle.
>> I also have a small motorcycle.
I am proud of them.
Becuase I am very enjoyable to ride them.
Becuase I am very enjoyable to ride them.
>> I am proud of them because I enjoy riding them.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
Bye.
>> CORRECT
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