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2014-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 Mona

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i think this statement is very excellent suggestion every child are pride and careless so they always have accident to eliminate this problem we have to teach children to safe driving skills i absolutely agree about your statement.

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Hi there!   Happy Monday to you!!! Thank you for agreeing with my statement... I am really glad to know that. Anyway, have time to read some of your corrections....:) I\'m looking forward to hear from you again... Goodbye ans see you in class!!! Take care!!! Teacher Mona   i think this statement is very excellent suggestion >> I think this statement has a very excellent suggestion.every child are pride and careless >> Every child has more pride and sometimes careless.so they always have accident >> So, they always have accidents.to eliminate this problem >> To eliminate this problem,we have to teach children to safe driving skills>> We have to teach our children to drive safely. i absolutely agree about your statement. >> I absolutely agree with your statement.

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