I forgot.4/13 homework
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What do you think is the reason why privacy is important?
While communal consciousness is important in communal living,
Personally, privacy will also be important.
Because everyone wants to do what they want to do and what they want to do is different.
I used a translator because there were many words I didn't know about the words I wanted to express.
I'm sorry.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir [이름]. I simplified your sentences. Thank you for doing your homework.
You don\'t need to give a long answer. One sentence is okay. Have a good day! ^^
~~Teacher May~~
While communal consciousness is important in communal living,
Personally, privacy will also be important.
>> While being aware is important in our life, personally, privacy is also important.
>> Because everyone wants to do what they want to do and what they want to do is different.
>> Everyone wants to do what they want to do but sometimes, they do what\'s not right.
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