I forgot....
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Hello there again [이름]!
Thank you for making me smile.
Actually, we do have the same problem. I usually forget the list that I have to buy.
I can\'t remember the things that I wrote so it makes the cost bigger because I usually buy the things that are not important. Hihihi
Anyway, I think we should always make a reminder on our mobile phones, what do you think?
Thank you for doing your homework tonight. See you tomorrow.
Teacher Nina
I often forgot the list what I have to buy.
>> I often forget the list of the things I have to buy.
It makes matter wores, because I have to pay for the something more that I had planned.
>> It makes the situation worse, because I have to pay more on something that I didn\'t plan to buy.
>> OR: It makes the situation worse, because I have to pay more on something that wasn\'t planned.
When it comes to expenditure, the more smaller is the more better.
>> When it comes to expenditure, the smaller the better.
So, when I go to shopping, I make a list what I have to buy.
>> So, when I go shopping, I make a list of the things I have to buy.
however I often forgot it. and I buy what I want to buy.
>> However, I often forget it and I buy what I want.
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