I forgot....

2014-03-18 · 첨삭 강사 ali

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I often forgot the list what I have to buy. It makes matter wores, because I have to pay for the something more that I had planned. When it comes to expenditure, the more smaller is the more better. So, when I go to shopping, I make a list what I have to buy. however I often forgot it. and I buy what I want to buy.

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Hello there again [이름]!

Thank you for making me smile.
Actually, we do have the same problem. I usually forget the list that I have to buy.

I can\'t remember the things that I wrote so it makes the cost bigger because I usually buy the things that are not important. Hihihi

Anyway, I think we should always make a reminder on our mobile phones, what do you think?

Thank you for doing your homework tonight. See you tomorrow.

Teacher Nina

 

I often forgot the list what I have to buy.

>> I often forget the list of the things I have to buy.
It makes matter wores, because I have to pay for the something more that I had planned.

>> It makes the situation worse, because I have to pay more on something that I didn\'t plan to buy.

>> OR: It makes the situation worse, because I have to pay more on something that wasn\'t planned.
When it comes to expenditure, the more smaller is the more better.

>> When it comes to expenditure, the smaller the better.
So, when I go to shopping, I make a list what I have to buy.

>> So, when I go shopping, I make a list of the things I have to buy.
however I often forgot it. and I buy what I want to buy.

>> However, I often forget it and I buy what I want.

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