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I was thinkg that I needed to build up my vocabulary since nowadays I'm likely use very small range of words. So, I sometimes face the difficulty that I don't come up with proper words. One reason is that I'm in Korea so I don't speak in English in my daily life. Second, I don't read newspapers or watch TV as much as I did in the US. In addition, I'm preparing the entrance exam for medical school so I want to focus on that. It means I don't really work on English. I just don't want to forget how to speak or read. However, I really need to do something since I'm forgetting. So, I made up my mind that I will watch a video every morning and during my meal. I hope it would work out.
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Hello [이름],
I hope it works out for you. I'm glad you find time to improve on your English skill. I'm sure it'll pay off in the end.
-RJ-
I was thinkg that I needed to build up my vocabulary since nowadays I'm likely use very small range of words.
>>I was thinking that I need to build up my vocabulary since nowadays I'm likely to use a very small range of words.
So, I sometimes face the difficulty that I don't come up with proper words.
>>So, I sometimes face the difficulty of not coming up with proper words.
One reason is that I'm in Korea so I don't speak in English in my daily life.
>>correct
Second, I don't read newspapers or watch TV as much as I did in the US.
>>correct
In addition, I'm preparing the entrance exam for medical school so I want to focus on that.
>>In addition, I'm preparing for the entrance exam for medical school so I want to focus on that.
It means I don't really work on English.
>>It means I don't really work on my English.
I just don't want to forget how to speak or read.
>>correct
However, I really need to do something since I'm forgetting.
>>correct
So, I made up my mind that I will watch a video every morning and during my meal.
>>correct
I hope it would work out.
>>correct
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