I found "thesis"!! ^^kkk..

2010-11-04 · 첨삭 강사 Jessica

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Conference papers are in hospital at the end. I have been preparing a paper to represent the ward. The subject of my study, about "How effective diabetes education is". Currently I am studying how effective training has been diabetics. I have a question^^ "Thesis" and "paper" to use any of the words there? Which word is more appropriate? "Annonuce" and "conference" and "presentation" What is the difference?

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Hi, Mi [이름]..Oh, so you are going to have a presentation about Diabetis Mellitus. That is actually a very broad topic to discuss about. Well, anyway just check the meaning of the following words: announce?  means to give a notice of something. conference? means a meeting. presentation? means demonstration or lecture about a certain topic.  Hope you understood everything.See you.^^   Conference papers are in hospital at the end. >>>Conference papers are in the hospital at the end. I have been preparing a paper to represent the ward. >>>I have been preparing my papers to represent our ward. The subject of my study, about "How effective diabetes education is". >>>I will talk about how effective education is,to diabetic patients. Currently I am studying how effective training has been diabetics. >>>Currently, I am studying how effective training has been about diabetics. I have a question^^ >>>correct sentence "Thesis" and "paper" to use any of the words there? >>>Thesis?and papers?.do they have the same meanings?Can I use this two words? Which word is more appropriate? >>>correct sentence >>>You can use either two of them.They are both correct.. "Annonuce" and "conference" and "presentation" What is the difference? >>>What is the difference among this three words, announce?conference?and presentation?    

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