I got a cold.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think I got a cold. I got a slight headache and a sore throat. I was sneezing and sniveling all day long. Nowadays, the weather is getting warmer and warmer so I wore thin clothes when I went out. However, it wasn't warm enough to wear thin clothes. I felt chilly winds yesterday.
It's easy to catch a cold during the change of seasons because of the huge daily temperature range. I should rest enough time and go to sleep early on the weekend. Faye, my tutor, have a nice weekend! See you on Monday.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I am very sorry to hear that. I hope you’ll feel better tomorrow. Have a great weekend, too! I’ll see you on Monday!
-T. Faye
I think I got a cold.
>> I think I got colds.
I got a slight headache and a sore throat.
>> Correct.
I was sneezing and sniveling all day long.
>> Correct.
Nowadays, the weather is getting warmer and warmer so I wore thin clothes when I went out.
>> Nowadays, the weather is getting warmer and warmer, so I wear thin clothes when I went out.
However, it wasn't warm enough to wear thin clothes.
>> However, it isn't warm enough to wear thin clothes.
I felt chilly winds yesterday.
>> I felt cold with the wind yesterday.It's easy to catch a cold during the change of seasons because of the huge daily temperature range.
>> Correct.
I should rest enough time and go to sleep early on the weekend.
>> Correct.
Faye, my tutor, have a nice weekend!
>> Correct.
See you on Monday.
>> Correct.
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