I got a cold.

2011-02-25 · 첨삭 강사 Louis

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I think I got a cold. I got a slight headache and a sore throat. I was sneezing and sniveling all day long. Nowadays, the weather is getting warmer and warmer so I wore thin clothes when I went out. However, it wasn't warm enough to wear thin clothes. I felt chilly winds yesterday. It's easy to catch a cold during the change of seasons because of the huge daily temperature range. I should rest enough time and go to sleep early on the weekend. Faye, my tutor, have a nice weekend! See you on Monday.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! I am very sorry to hear that. I hope you’ll feel better tomorrow. Have a great weekend, too! I’ll see you on Monday! -T. Faye I think I got a cold. >> I think I got colds. I got a slight headache and a sore throat. >> Correct. I was sneezing and sniveling all day long. >> Correct. Nowadays, the weather is getting warmer and warmer so I wore thin clothes when I went out. >> Nowadays, the weather is getting warmer and warmer, so I wear thin clothes when I went out. However, it wasn't warm enough to wear thin clothes. >> However, it isn't warm enough to wear thin clothes. I felt chilly winds yesterday. >> I felt cold with the wind yesterday.It's easy to catch a cold during the change of seasons because of the huge daily temperature range. >> Correct. I should rest enough time and go to sleep early on the weekend. >> Correct.  Faye, my tutor, have a nice weekend! >> Correct. See you on Monday. >> Correct.

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