I got up early~~!!
학생이 쓴 원문
hi~~! lei~~~!!
I'm so sleepy.
I cannot help getting up early. because today is a special day.
"eulji practice"
This is a preparing practice for a state of emergency.
so our company asked early attendance to the personnel.
but i didn't have to come early.
I'm not a requisite person.
I heard a woman's said in this case " oh... crap..."
fortunately we handed in a row of kimbob.
do you know "kimbob"?
that is a korean food.
that is delicious and convenient.
for example hamburger and californian roll.
by the way...I'm so happy. your sweet voice make me happy.
thank you lei~~!!
see you soon.
from "J"
강사 첨삭
Hi J!!
Good morning to you too...Thank you for passing a composition. You have a sweet voice too...I know kimbob, I tasted it before and it is delicious...Anyways regarding your composition I made some revisions to your sentences. Kindly check on them!!! Have a great day ahead and I'll talk to you again tomorrow.
Lei :-)
I'm so sleepy.
>>correct
I cannot help getting up early because today is a special day.
>>correct
"eulji practice"
>>correct
This is a preparing practice for a state of emergency.
>>This is a drill for state emergency.
so our company asked early attendance to the personnel.
>>So our company asked all of their personnels to go to work early
but i didn't have to come early.
>>But I didn't have to go in early
I'm not a requisite person.
>>correct
I heard a woman's said in this case " oh... crap..."
>>I heard a woman say "oh crap" when it was announced
fortunately we handed in a row of kimbob.
>>fortunately, we were handed a row of kimbob
do you know "kimbob"?
>>correct
that is a korean food.
>>correct
it is delicious and convenient.
>>correct
for example hamburger and californian roll.
>>correct
by the way...I'm so happy. your sweet voice makes me happy.
>>correct
thank you lei~~!!
>>correct
see you soon.
>>correct
from "J"
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