I grew up
학생이 쓴 원문
I grew up at andong city
We moved another place many times so it.s hard to adapt
also i was timid girl
next time we moved at pohang there was too cold i had frostbite in my hahds and toe
what i remember is dnly great river
강사 첨삭
Your family moved a lot. I can relate.
Great composition today!
Let\'s talk more about it in our class.
~Teacher Eve.
I grew up at andong city
>> Correct!
We moved another place many times so it.s hard to adapt
>> We moved a lot to different places, so it\'s hard to adapt.
also i was timid girl
>> I was also a timid girl.
next time we moved at pohang there was too cold i had frostbite in my hahds and toe
>> Then we moved to Pohang. It was very cold. I had frostbite in my hands and toes.
what i remember is dnly great river
>> What I remember is only the great river.
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