I guess
학생이 쓴 원문
I guess,,,,
Anything can be the meaningful souvenier, If it has a stroy How to It can be here or at your face. Even It is a just 1 doller.
In my case, I give it a story like a Episod about it and tell the story someone whom you want to give it.
I bought a beautiful rose which is made of plastic.
There is some room for storing a ring. so I bought a ring and necklace in Tailand.
At that time, I didn't have a girl friend, so I decided to give it with rose when I meet my girl friend.
Time went by fast, Finally I met Carolyn and I gave it to her in 100 day anniversary. Of course I told her the story of it.
I think she was moved because of the story.
So the plastic rose is the most interesting souvenier for me.
It is good to give a story to a present.!
강사 첨삭
Wow! Sweet!
You are really a great person, [이름]!
Oh my god! I am sure that Carolyn was really happy during that time.It is really nice to hear your love story. Thanks!
I am excited to ehar more of your stories in class.
Teacher Nina
I guess,,,,
>> CorrectAnything can be the meaningful souvenier, If it has a stroy How to It can be here or at your face.
>> Did you mean: Anything can be a meaningful souvenier if it has a story such as, how did you get it?
Even It is a just 1 doller.
>> Even if it is just for one dollar.
>> OR: Even if it costs only for a dollar. In my case, I give it a story like a Episod about it and tell the story someone whom you want to give it.
>> In my case, I make a story about it and teel it to someone whom I want to give it to. I bought a beautiful rose which is made of plastic.
>> CorrectThere is some room for storing a ring.
>> There is a place where you can put a ring.
so I bought a ring and necklace in Tailand.
>> Correct ( spelling check: Thailand ^^) At that time, I didn\'t have a girl friend, so I decided to give it with rose when I meet my girl friend.
>> CorrectTime went by fast, Finally I met Carolyn and I gave it to her in 100 day anniversary.
>> Time went by fast, Finally I met Carolyn and I gave it to her during our anniversary.
Of course I told her the story of it.
>> CorrectI think she was moved because of the story.
>> CorrectSo the plastic rose is the most interesting souvenier for me.
>> CorrectIt is good to give a story to a present.!
>> It is good to make a story for a present/ gift.
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