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2014-09-22 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I guess,,,, Anything can be the meaningful souvenier, If it has a stroy How to It can be here or at your face. Even It is a just 1 doller. In my case, I give it a story like a Episod about it and tell the story someone whom you want to give it. I bought a beautiful rose which is made of plastic. There is some room for storing a ring. so I bought a ring and necklace in Tailand. At that time, I didn't have a girl friend, so I decided to give it with rose when I meet my girl friend. Time went by fast, Finally I met Carolyn and I gave it to her in 100 day anniversary. Of course I told her the story of it. I think she was moved because of the story. So the plastic rose is the most interesting souvenier for me. It is good to give a story to a present.!

강사 첨삭

Wow! Sweet! You are really a great person, [이름]! Oh my god! I am sure that Carolyn was really happy during that time.It is really nice to hear your love story. Thanks! I am excited to ehar more of your stories in class. Teacher Nina   I guess,,,, >> CorrectAnything can be the meaningful souvenier, If it has a stroy How to It can be here or at your face. >> Did you mean: Anything can be a meaningful souvenier if it has a story such as, how did you get it? Even It is a just 1 doller. >> Even if it is just for one dollar. >> OR: Even if it costs only for a dollar. In my case, I give it a story like a Episod about it and tell the story someone whom you want to give it. >> In my case, I make a story about it and teel it to someone whom I want to give it to. I bought a beautiful rose which is made of plastic. >> CorrectThere is some room for storing a ring. >> There is a place where you can put a ring. so I bought a ring and necklace in Tailand. >> Correct ( spelling check: Thailand ^^) At that time, I didn\'t have a girl friend, so I decided to give it with rose when I meet my girl friend. >> CorrectTime went by fast, Finally I met Carolyn and I gave it to her in 100 day anniversary. >> Time went by fast, Finally I met Carolyn and I gave it to her during our anniversary. Of course I told her the story of it. >> CorrectI think she was moved because of the story. >> CorrectSo the plastic rose is the most interesting souvenier for me. >> CorrectIt is good to give a story to a present.! >> It is good to make a story for a present/ gift.

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