I had a cold
학생이 쓴 원문
I've wanted you to just correct my sentences. But, as of now, I want you to have my sentences naturally corrected in America. I want to use lots of sentences which is frequantly used in America.
As I told you, I worked last Saturday and met my girlfriend after work.
But, I've had a headache since yesterday. So, I can not concentrate my works anymore.
I will go home as soon as possible. I'll meet my friend who was working at our office by a intern man when I got in this office at first. He is taking a rest by 24 Jan and come back to our office by a fresh man. Just, I've wondrering how he lives. So, I contacked him to say hello after work.
Anyway, I'll go home to take a rest after meeting him as soon as I leave my office.
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Thank you so much for sharing this one to me.
I hope that you will enjoy your time with your friend.
May you continue to have a great day!
See you!
_T.Au
P.S.
Remind me provide a lot of expressions frequently used in English speaking countries in class, okay?
Thank you!^^
I\'ve wanted you to just correct my sentences.
>> Correct!
But, as of now, I want you to have my sentences naturally corrected in America.
>>But as of now, I want you to correct my sentences as spoken in America.
I want to use lots of sentences which is frequantly used in America.>> I want to use lots of sentences used frequently in America.As I told you, I worked last Saturday and met my girlfriend after work.
>> Correct!But, I\'ve had a headache since yesterday.
>> But I had this headache since yesterday.
So, I can not concentrate my works anymore.
>> So I cannot concentrate on my works anymore.I will go home as soon as possible.
>> Correct!
I\'ll meet my friend who was working at our office by a intern man when I got in this office at first.
>> I\'ll meet my friend who was working at our office as an intern when I first got in this office.
He is taking a rest by 24 Jan and come back to our office by a fresh man.
>> He is going to take a rest this coming January 24 and he will come back to our office with a fresh aura.
Just, I\'ve wondrering how he lives. So, I contacked him to say hello after work. >> It\'s just that, I\'m wondering how he lives nowadays, so I contacted him to say hello and we will meet after work.Anyway, I\'ll go home to take a rest after meeting him as soon as I leave my office.
>> Correct!
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