I had a great break last weekend but...

2014-05-27 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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Hi Debby! :) I'm sorry for what I put off a yesterday's class. When I come to my home, I leave my home on Tuesday or Sunday. But especially yesteday, I left my home on Monday morning. So if I didn't postpone the class, I might take a call inside a bus or subway and it will disturb other people. This is why I put off the class. Please understand me. :'( How was your last weekend? I spent pretty good time. I went to watch a movie "Godzilla", and "X-Men: Days of Future Past". Yup, I saw two movies on the weekend! Because I love movie. XD I wish another interesting movies go on release soon. <Essay> No, I hadn't ever. Because when we moved into new home, there were already modernized. I saw several times that many people were in situation to be expelled for modernizing, but it was not my case.

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Hello there [이름]^^   Thank you for sending me this homework. You do not need to apologize since I know that you are looking for the most convinient way to have class since I know that you like to concentrate when we are talking. I do know how bothering it would be to be on the phone on a moving vehicle. People around you would be staring. hehehehehe   WOW! you watched those movies already? Tell me about them in class.^^ I heard that Godzilla is not that good but then I had watched the old Godzilla movies and the other X-men movies. I want to know what are the changes. Maybe you can tell me.^^ Please study my corrections although you did well on most of your sentences. Good job kiddo! ^^   T.Debby^^   Here are my corrections for you:   Hi Debby! :)I\'m sorry for what I put off a yesterday\'s class. >> CORRECT OR> I\'m sorry I had to cancel class yesterday.When I come to my home, I leave my home on Tuesday or Sunday. >> When I came home, I left my home on Tuesday or Sunday. [past tenses of verbs since it had already happened]  But especially yesteday, I left my home on Monday morning. >> CORRECT OR> It was unusual that I left my phone at home yesterday. So if I didn\'t postpone the class, I might take a call inside a bus or subway and it will disturb other people. >> CORRECT OR> It might have caused disturbance if I had my class inside the bus or subway. This is why I put off the class. Please understand me. :\'( >> CORRECT OR> Please understand why I had to cancel class yesterday. :(How was your last weekend? I spent pretty good time. >> How was your last weekend? I spent a pretty good time. I went to watch a movie \"Godzilla\", and \"X-Men: Days of Future Past\". >> CORRECT OR> I saw the movies \"Godzilla\", and \"X-Men: Days of Future Past\".  Yup, I saw two movies on the weekend! Because I love movie. XD >> Yup, I saw two movies on the weekend! Because I love movies. XD [plural tenses] I wish another interesting movies go on release soon. >> I wish other interesting movies would be released soon. [wishing for something in the future so use \"would be\"]<Essay>No, I hadn\'t ever. >> No I wouldn\'t ever. [use would for the pronoun \"I\" and you mean you\'ll never do it] Because when we moved into new home, there were already modernized. >> Because when we moved into new home, it was already modernized. [use \"it\" as pronoun for \"home\'\' and the verb \"was\" for the past tense of a singular noun]  I saw several times that many people were in situation to be expelled for modernizing, but it was not my case. >> I saw several times that many people were in a situation of being expelled for modernizing, but it was not my case. [\"of being\" since you are describing the situation as it was happening]

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