I had a great break last weekend but...
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Hi Debby! :)
I'm sorry for what I put off a yesterday's class.
When I come to my home, I leave my home on Tuesday or Sunday. But especially yesteday, I left my home on Monday morning. So if I didn't postpone the class, I might take a call inside a bus or subway and it will disturb other people. This is why I put off the class. Please understand me. :'(
How was your last weekend? I spent pretty good time. I went to watch a movie "Godzilla", and "X-Men: Days of Future Past". Yup, I saw two movies on the weekend! Because I love movie. XD
I wish another interesting movies go on release soon.
<Essay>
No, I hadn't ever. Because when we moved into new home, there were already modernized. I saw several times that many people were in situation to be expelled for modernizing, but it was not my case.
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Hello there [이름]^^
Thank you for sending me this homework. You do not need to apologize since
I know that you are looking for the most convinient way to have class since I know that you like
to concentrate when we are talking. I do know how bothering it would be to be on the phone
on a moving vehicle. People around you would be staring. hehehehehe
WOW! you watched those movies already? Tell me about them in class.^^
I heard that Godzilla is not that good but then I had watched the old Godzilla movies and the other X-men movies.
I want to know what are the changes. Maybe you can tell me.^^
Please study my corrections although you did well on most of your sentences.
Good job kiddo! ^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you:
Hi Debby! :)I\'m sorry for what I put off a yesterday\'s class.
>> CORRECT
OR> I\'m sorry I had to cancel class yesterday.When I come to my home, I leave my home on Tuesday or Sunday.
>> When I came home, I left my home on Tuesday or Sunday.
[past tenses of verbs since it had already happened]
But especially yesteday, I left my home on Monday morning.
>> CORRECT
OR> It was unusual that I left my phone at home yesterday.
So if I didn\'t postpone the class, I might take a call inside a bus or subway and it will disturb other people.
>> CORRECT
OR> It might have caused disturbance if I had my class inside the bus or subway.
This is why I put off the class. Please understand me. :\'(
>> CORRECT
OR> Please understand why I had to cancel class yesterday. :(How was your last weekend? I spent pretty good time.
>> How was your last weekend? I spent a pretty good time.
I went to watch a movie \"Godzilla\", and \"X-Men: Days of Future Past\".
>> CORRECT
OR> I saw the movies \"Godzilla\", and \"X-Men: Days of Future Past\".
Yup, I saw two movies on the weekend! Because I love movie. XD
>> Yup, I saw two movies on the weekend! Because I love movies. XD
[plural tenses]
I wish another interesting movies go on release soon.
>> I wish other interesting movies would be released soon.
[wishing for something in the future so use \"would be\"]<Essay>No, I hadn\'t ever.
>> No I wouldn\'t ever.
[use would for the pronoun \"I\" and you mean you\'ll never do it]
Because when we moved into new home, there were already modernized.
>> Because when we moved into new home, it was already modernized.
[use \"it\" as pronoun for \"home\'\' and the verb \"was\" for the past tense of a singular noun]
I saw several times that many people were in situation to be expelled for modernizing, but it was not my case.
>> I saw several times that many people were in a situation of being expelled for modernizing, but it was not my case.
[\"of being\" since you are describing the situation as it was happening]
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