I had a meal with my professor and friends.

2012-09-10 · 첨삭 강사 Dana

학생이 쓴 원문

It was quite to explain what I wanted to say today. :) As I talked, I had a meal with my professor and friends on the weekend. They congratulated me for having a regular job. My professor is very special for me. She is my role model and mento. Also, she will be my godmother next Sunday when I am baptized. I've been going to a christian church since March. My baptismal name is Roselina and that's why my english name is [이름]. :)

강사 첨삭

Hi there, well, thanks for such a well-thought-of and lovely composition. I\'m glad that you got to have that lunch or dinner with people who are precious to you. I am also happy that you get to be close to your professor, nothing beats a teacher as a friend, =) See you in class and have a wonderful evening =) -T. Lara =) It was quite to explain what I wanted to say today. :)>>> It was quite hard to explain what I wanted to say today. :)As I talked, I had a meal with my professor and friends on the weekend.>>> As I have said, I had a meal with my professor and friends over the weekend.They congratulated me for having a regular job.>>> CorrectMy professor is very special for me.>>> CorrectShe is my role model and mento.>>> She is my role model and mentor.Also, she will be my godmother next Sunday when I am baptized.>>> Also, she will be my godmother when I will be baptized next Sunday.I\'ve been going to a christian church since March.>>> Correct, just capitalize ChristianMy baptismal name is Roselina and that\'s why my english name is [이름].:)>>> Correct, just capitalize English .

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