I had a meeting today.
학생이 쓴 원문
I had a meeting how to up the market share of korean food "Gochujang", brand is "Chungjeongwon".
At this time, we was supposed to talk about idea.
for doing it, we should have viewed the data and articles.
but one of us hadn't viewed.
so He can not but listens throughout the meeting.
강사 첨삭
Hello Susan!
I am glad that you are trying to make complete sentences. Please continue learning and exploring the English Language. Thank you also for sharing me some of your experiences. See you later!
T.Faye
Here are your corrections:
I had a meeting how to up the market share of korean food "Gochujang", brand is "Chungjeongwon".>>I had a meeting on how to increase the "Gochujang뭩" ["Chungjeongwon"] market share.At this time, we was supposed to talk about idea.>>We were supposed to have an idea at this time.for doing it, we should have viewed the data and articles. but one of us hadn't viewed.>>We should have viewed the data and articles too, but we haven뭪 viewed it yet.so He can not but listens throughout the meeting.
>>So he cannot do anything but listen all through out the meeting.
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