I had a meeting with my high school friends

2010-12-08 · 첨삭 강사 RJ

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I met my high school friends and it was a really good time for me to refresh. We had a nice dinner which was italian food with garlic. I love cooked garlic in a fried or baked way. The pizza was amazing since combinations of pineapples, baked garlic and cheese was very harmonious. I catched up each other. And, finally, we focused on one of my friends relationship. She is kind of serious about that. She is thinking of getting married her boyfriend. Another friend is worried about her future because she is waiting for the result of the test to be accepted for master degree. The other friend is planning to move to New Zealand, finally to Canada. I hope her dream comes ture. The meeting ended up with planning to throw a end-year party.

강사 첨삭

[이름],

Friends are very important. Spending time with them is very good for you. I hope you are excited to go to the year end party.

 -RJ

I had a meeting with my high school friends

>>Correct

I met my high school friends and it was a really good time for me to refresh.

>>Correct

 We had a nice dinner which was italian food with garlic.

>>Correct

I love cooked garlic in a fried or baked way.

>>I love the taste of fried and baked garlic.

The pizza was amazing since combinations of pineapples, baked garlic and cheese was very harmonious.

>>correct

 I catched up each other.

>>I caught up with my friends.

And, finally, we focused on one of my friends relationship.

>>Finally, we focused on one of my friends relationship.

She is kind of serious about that.

>>Correct

She is thinking of getting married her boyfriend.

>>She is thinking of getting married with her boyfriend.

Another friend is worried about her future because she is waiting for the result of the test to be accepted for master degree.

>>Another friend of ours is worried about her future because she is waiting for an acceptance letter for a masters degree.

The other friend is planning to move to New Zealand, finally to Canada.

>>The other friend we have is plannning to move to New Zealand and then settle in Canada.

I hope her dream comes ture.

>>I hope her dreams come true.

The meeting ended up with planning to throw a end-year party.

>>The meeting ended with planning to throw a year-end party.

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