I had a mistake LOL

2014-07-03 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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It was two million won and two hundred thousand won is not that much amoount. LOL Counting makes me dizzy sometimes. Actully father gave me that money for my surgery. Anyway, today I watched an amrerican soap drama named LOST. Ofcorse It's really famouse and one of my friends is crazy on it. Today was the first day that I watched. Because in that time, when I heard the story It looked so serious and dark so I thought I can makes me blue and sad. But today I realized that I was wrong. It was quite fun and interesting. After finishing this composition, I'll download that series.

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Happy Monday dear [이름]!   I was reviewing our class awhile back and I remembered I said two hundred thousand. I was actually confused too. Six zeros is actually equivalent to million.  Anyway, I apologize for my mistake. This is my first time to hear about that soap opera. Is it a new one? If I have time, I\'m gonna check on that since you said it\'s interesting. Tell me more details of that drama tomorrow, okay?   Have a great evening and see you tomorrow!   Always, ~Teacher Shanee    was two million won and two hundred thousand won is not that much amoount. LOL>>> Correct! (amount) Counting makes me dizzy sometimes. >>> Correct! Actully father gave me that money for my surgery. >>> Correct! (actually, Father) OR: >>> Actually, my father gave me that money for my surgery.Anyway, today I watched an amrerican soap drama named LOST. >>> Anyway, today I watched an American soap opera entitled LOST.Ofcorse It\'s really famouse and one of my friends is crazy on it. >>> Of course, it\'s really famous and one of my friends is crazy over it. Today was the first day that I watched. >>> Today is the first day that I watched it.Because in that time, when I heard the story It looked so serious and dark so I thought I can makes me blue and sad. >>> Bacause the time when I heard about the story, it seemed so serious and dark so I thought it will just make me blue. But today I realized that I was wrong. >>> Correct! It was quite fun and interesting. >>> Correct! After finishing this composition, I\'ll downloadthat series. >>> OR: After finishing this composition, I\'ll download the episodes.

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