I had a party with my coworker.
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Hello!
Thank you for doing your homework! ^^ And with only 2 mistakes too, you are definitely getting better!
Please take note of the corrections I\'ve made with numbers 2 and 3 and try to review them, okay?
Other than that, I am very happy with your homework - you did very well!
Next time, let\'s try to get a perfect score, shall we? :)
Also, I\'m glad to hear you had fun with your coworkers. Sometimes, parties with coworkers are necessary for you to able to relieve some stress from work, and to create bonds with your coworkers. Your description of food is making me hungry. XD Next time treat me to dinner also, yes? Haha.. just kidding. :)
Oh, I have made some corrections with your paragraph as well. Try to review them too if you have the time.
Thank you once again for doing your homework and for sharing your experience with me. Tell me more during our class okay? I look forward to it. See you soon!
~T.Nina~
1.The course begins on 7 January and ends on 10 March. (at, in, on, for)
>> Both are correct!
2.I went to bed in midnight.(at, in, on, for)
>> AT
3.We arrived at 5 o\' clock on the morning. (at, in, on, for)
>> Correct!, IN
4.Mozart was born in Salzburg in 1756. (at, in, on, for)
>> Correct!
5.Are you doing anything special on the weekend? (at, in, on, for)
>> Correct!
6.Hurry up! We have to go in five minutes. (at, in, on, for)
>> Correct!
7.I met Ann on Tuesday. (at, in, on, for)
>> Correct!
8.He has lived in India for two years. (at, in, on, for)
>> Correct!
9.I\'ll phone you on Tuesday morning at & a.m. (at, in, on, for)
>> Correct!
10.Tom\'s grandmother died in 1987 at the age of 81. (at, in, on, for)
>> Correct!
I postphoned our class on wednesday.
>> I postponed our class on Wednesday.
we ate meat for dinner.
>> You can also try saying, we had meat for dinner.
the way eat the meat was different. It was not grilled meat but it was boiled a few second in boiling water. When we got some meat in the boiling water,
the nutrition in the meat was out. It became soup.
>> The way the meat was eaten is different. The meat was not grilled, instead, it was boiled for a few seconds in a boiling water.
>> You can also try saying, When we placed the meat into the boiling water, the nutrition seeped out and became a soup.
So we can ate meat and also soup.
>> You can also try saying, So we had meat and soup as well.
the most important thing is that meat is provided complimetarily.
>> You can also try saying, The most important thing is the meat which was provided like a complimentary.
It was a great time.
>> Correct! but you can also try saying, We had a great time at the party.^^
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