I had a party with my friends

2014-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Let's meet _______________ Tuesday. on 2. Let's meet _______________ two hours. in 3. I saw him _______________ 3:00 PM. at 4. Do you want to go there _______________ the morning? in 5. Let's do it _______________ the weekend. on 6. I can't work _______________ night. at 7. I'll be there _______________ 10 minutes. in 8. Let's meet at the park _______________ noon. at 9. I saw her _______________ my birthday. on 10. I like going to the beach _______________ the summer. in On this weekend, I visited my friend's house. and his parents treat us with susi and lot's of food. We ate alot including alchol. The reason why we gathered together was to celebrate his achievement. He ended his flight course, so now he is pilot. Traditionally, Korean jet fighter wears red muffler. We cheered for him. we are very proud of him to end that course. After celebrating, we went out and to beer mart. we drank what we want, and He bought for us.

강사 첨삭

Hi,

Happy Monday!

I hope you had fun last weekend visiting your friend\'s house.

Also, I hope you didn\'t have a hangover for drinking a lot.

Thank you as well for having the time answering your homework.

Good job on your homework.

We just have to make some improvements on your grammar but in total, you have improved a lot.

Keep it up!

Teacher Nina ^_^

1. Let\'s meet _______________ Tuesday.
on

>>Correct

2. Let\'s meet _______________ two hours.
in

>>Correct

OR >>Let\'s meet in two hours.

3. I saw him _______________ 3:00 PM.
at

>>Correct

4. Do you want to go there _______________ the morning?
in

>>Correct
5. Let\'s do it _______________ the weekend.
on

>>Correct

6. I can\'t work _______________ night.
at

>>Correct
7. I\'ll be there _______________ 10 minutes.
in

>>Correct
8. Let\'s meet at the park _______________ noon.
at

>>Correct
9. I saw her _______________ my birthday.
on

>>Correct
10. I like going to the beach _______________ the summer.
in

>>Correct

On this weekend, I visited my friend\'s house.

>> This weekend, I visited my friend\'s house.
and his parents treat us with susi and lot\'s of food.

>> And his parents treat us with Sushi and a lot of food.
We ate alot including alchol.

>> Correct

OR >> We ate and drank a lot of alcohol.
The reason why we gathered together was to celebrate his achievement.

>> The reason that we gathered together is to celebrate his achievement.
He ended his flight course, so now he is pilot.

>> Correct [He is a pilot.]
Traditionally, Korean jet fighter wears red muffler.

>> Correct [A Korean jet fighter wears a red muffler.]
We cheered for him. we are very proud of him to end that course.

>> We cheered for him. We are very proud of him for ending the course.

OR> >We cheered for him and we are very proud of him for passing that course.
After celebrating, we went out and to beer mart.

>> After the celebration, we went to a beer mart.
we drank what we want, and He bought for us.

>> We drank what we wanted and he bought it for us.^^

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