I had a pastime.

2019-07-09 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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Kids played games as a pastime. Going to the movies is a very popular pastime. Pastime is the word that I heard for the first time. I ride a bicycle as a pastime. I often playing computer game as a pastime. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thanks for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great night ☺

Kids played games as a pastime.
>> Kids play games as their pastime.

Going to the movies is a very popular pastime.
>> CORRECT

Pastime is the word that I heard for the first time.
>> It\'s my first time hearing the word pastime.

I ride a bicycle as a pastime.
>> Riding bicycle is my pastime.

I often playing computer game as a pastime.
>> I often play computer games and it\'s my pastime.

Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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