I had a rainy days inevitably after graduation of my high school.
학생이 쓴 원문
It is because of Korean traditional activity that an adult must earn his own property.
I don\\\'t know about it well but I think it is same in the America and all the same on earth.
I am [Name] kidding I am sorry.
Rainy days comes when one feel some troubles as I think.
I am trying to live a better life as possible as I can and truobles make me strong by strong.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello again, Wee!
Thanks again for doing your homework ^^
I hope you are having a splendid night.
Talk to you later ☺
It is because of Korean traditional activity that an adult must earn his own property.
>> It is because of Korean traditional activities that adults must earn their own properties.
>> It is because of Korean traditional activities that adults must earn their own properties.
I don\\\'t know about it well but I think it is same in the America and all the same on earth.
>> I don\'t know about it well but I think it is the same with other countries.
>> I don\'t know about it well but I think it is the same with other countries.
I am [Name] kidding I am sorry.
>> I am just kidding, I am sorry.
>> I am just kidding, I am sorry.
Rainy days comes when one feel some troubles as I think.
>> Rainy days come when one feels bad, I guess.
>> Rainy days come when one feels bad, I guess.
I am trying to live a better life as possible as I can and truobles make me strong by strong.
>> I am trying to live a better life as possible as I can and troubles make me much stronger.
>> I am trying to live a better life as possible as I can and troubles make me much stronger.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
Bye.
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