I had an anatomic class.
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Today, in a biological practicing class, I did anatomize a flathead mullet. Before the class, I thought it would be very crucial so I didn't want to see it. However, as soon as the class started, I grabbed a knife and began to dissect the one. I tried to see more things as much as I can. I saw the heart, liver, gall bladder, and bowel. Unfortunately, I couldn't see the kidney even though I didn't break down the organs. When I asked to the teacher assistant about why I couldn't see it, she said it is hard to see since it is too small and it is just right upside of the bowel. Today, I enjoyed the class more that I expected.
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Hello [이름],
Hmmm... it does sound a bit interesting. I agree though at first it does sound a bit disgusting. Talk to you again tomorrow.
-RJ
Today, in a biological practicing class, I did anatomize a flathead mullet. >>Today, in a biological practicing class, I anatomized a flathead mullet.
Before the class, I thought it would be very crucial so I didn't want to see it.
>>correct
However, as soon as the class started, I grabbed a knife and began to dissect the one.
>>However, as soon as the class started, I grabbed a knife and began to dissect one.
I tried to see more things as much as I can. I saw the heart, liver, gall bladder, and bowel.
>>I tried to see as much as I can. I saw the heart, liver, gall bladder, and bowel.
Unfortunately, I couldn't see the kidney even though I didn't break down the organs.
>>Unfortunately, I couldn't see the kidney even though I did break down the organs.
When I asked to the teacher assistant about why I couldn't see it, she said it is hard to see since it is too small and it is just right upside of the bowel.
>>When I asked to the assistant teacher why I couldn't see it, she said it is hard to see since it is too small and it is just right upside of the bowel.
Today, I enjoyed the class more that I expected.
>>correct
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