I had celebrity time with our amazing team after first showcase in the Los angeles, US.
학생이 쓴 원문
I prepared for the first product showcase alone in Silicon Valley three years ago. I haven\'t experienced a proposed and prepared exhibition. So I had a hard time, but at that time, all my engineering colleagues helped me. We finished the event and had dinner. My boss said, \" [이름], you were so good. Share your thoughts.\" I walked ahead and saw all my colleagues. I didn\'t say anything, and I was crying.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
It is great to see you here at the composition page.
Team work always make the dream work. Sine you have a winner mindset, you can tap the potentials of your teammates to yield excellent results.
I am so happy for your in spite of all the difficulties of your work. You are so strong and resilient. Keep up the good work!
Congratulations for writing such a great composition. Keep it up!
See you.
-T. Donna~
>>> Correct! Very good sentences!
>>> I prepared for the first product showcase alone in Silicon Valley three years ago. I haven\'t experienced a proposed and prepared exhibition. So I had a hard time, but at the time, all my engineering colleagues helped me.
We finished the event and had dinner. My boss said, \" [이름], you were so good. Share your thoughts.\" I walked ahead and saw all my colleagues. I didn\'t say anything, and I was crying.
>>> Correct! Very good sentences!
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