i had nightfood(?) with my junior

2013-04-22 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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After your class, I called a one of my juniors who lives in second floor. and i met him at his room. I gathered all of them, calling chiken beershop to order some chikens. and we spent a lot of times talking each other. we really enjoyed that time. thogh I bought them all chikens, i thought it's not wasting money. 1. Hurricane season ___ June 1 and ___ November 30. b. begins, ends 2. A hurricane is a tropical storm with winds that ___ a constant speed of 74 miles per hour or more. b. could reach 3. The dangers of a storm ___ torrential rains, high winds and storm surges. a. include 4. The strongest hurricane recorded was the Florida Keys Storm of 1935. 500 people ___ during this Category 5 storm. b. were killed 5. A Hurricane Watch ___ for a coastal area when there is a threat of hurricane conditions within 24-36 hours. d. isn't issued

강사 첨삭

Hi there!

Wow! I think you had a blast!

It\'s a good thing that you get to bond with them.

Maintain that bond and I think friendship was built during that time.

Have a nice day!

See you in class.

T. Nina

After your class,

>> Correct!
I called a one of my juniors who lives in second floor.

>> I called one of my juniors who lives in the second floor.
and i met him at his room.

>> I went out and met him in his room.

 I gathered all of them, calling chiken beershop to order some chikens. and we spent a lot of times talking each other.

>> I invited them all and I started calling the beer and chicken shops to order and we spent a lot of time talking with each other.
we really enjoyed that time.

>> We really enjoyed our time.
thogh I bought them all chikens, i thought it\'s not wasting money.
>>Even if I brought them all some chicken, I thought it was not a waste of money.
1. Hurricane season ___ June 1 and ___ November 30.
b. begins, ends
>> Correct!
2. A hurricane is a tropical storm with winds that ___ a constant speed of 74 miles per hour or more.
b. could reach
>> A hurricane is a tropical storm with winds that have reached a constant speed of 74 miles per hour or more.

>> c. have reached
3. The dangers of a storm ___ torrential rains, high winds and storm surges.
a. include
>> Correct!
4. The strongest hurricane recorded was the Florida Keys Storm of 1935. 500 people ___ during this Category 5 storm.
b. were killed
>> Correct!
5. A Hurricane Watch ___ for a coastal area when there is a threat of hurricane conditions within 24-36 hours.
d. isn\'t issued

>> A Hurricane Watch is issued for a coastal area when there is a threat of hurricane conditions within 24-36 hours.

>> c. is issued

 

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