I had quality time with my daughter on Sunday

On Sunday, After I had breakfast, I looked out of window. Snow was falling heavlily. I remembered something I promised to my daughter. That is making snowman with my daughter. We went out at home and began making snowman. My daughter was so happy, me too. We was making snowman during about 1 hours. Although snowman is small, I had quality time with my daughter on Sunday.

Hello [이름] [이름]!

I’m so happy to know about your quality moment with your daughter. With your story, I also miss my family and I miss spending nice time with them. I hope that your family will always be happy and always be in good health!!

Ella

 

 I had quality time with my daughter on Sunday

>>correct

On Sunday, After I had breakfast, I looked out of window.

>> On Sunday, I looked at the window after I ate breakfast.
Snow was falling heavlily.

>>The snowfall was very heavy.

I remembered something I promised to my daughter.

>> While watching the snowfall,  I suddenly remembered a promise I made to my daughter.
That is making snowman with my daughter.

>>  I promised to make a snowman with her.
We went out at home and began making snowman.

>> We went out the house and began making a  snowman
My daughter was so happy, me too.

>> My daughter and I were so happy.

We was making snowman during about 1 hours.

>> We were made a snowman for about an hour.

 Although snowman is small, I had quality time with my daughter on Sunday

>>Alhough the  snowman was small, at least, I had a quality time with my daughter.