I had some experiences like that.
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when I watch a advertisement on tv, internet, sometimes I think that this product is necessary to me or I am looking for it. At that time I search for reviews about the product. If the reviews are good approximately, I used to buy it. Recently I bought a mimn massage machine. I am satisfied with it about 60 percent.
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Hi, Ju [이름]. I agree that sometimes advertisements make us think we need the product or that it is necessary and we are encouraged to buy it. Especially these days, since people cannot go on a vacation, we spend it on products that would make staying at home easier and comfortable.^^ It is good that these days we can search for reviews first before buying the product. Have a good evening and thank you once again for sharing your thoughts on our homework topic. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
I had some experiences like that.
>> CORRECT =)
when I watch a advertisement on tv, internet, sometimes I think that this product is necessary to me or I am looking for it.
>> When I watch an advertisement on TV or the internet, I sometimes think that this product is necessary for me or I am looking for it.
At that time I search for reviews about the product.
>> CORRECT =)
If the reviews are good approximately, I used to buy it.
>> If the reviews are good enough/ satisfactory I buy it.
Recently I bought a mimn massage machine.
>> Recently I bought a mini massage machine.
I am satisfied with it about 60 percent.
>> CORRECT =)
>> OR: I am about 60 percent satisfied with it.
I had some experiences like that.
>> CORRECT =)
when I watch a advertisement on tv, internet, sometimes I think that this product is necessary to me or I am looking for it.
>> When I watch an advertisement on TV or the internet, I sometimes think that this product is necessary for me or I am looking for it.
At that time I search for reviews about the product.
>> CORRECT =)
If the reviews are good approximately, I used to buy it.
>> If the reviews are good enough/ satisfactory I buy it.
Recently I bought a mimn massage machine.
>> Recently I bought a mini massage machine.
I am satisfied with it about 60 percent.
>> CORRECT =)
>> OR: I am about 60 percent satisfied with it.
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