I hate a melon like a radish.
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I bought a yellow melon in a traditional market a few days ago.
It looked so delicious and the color covered in yellow was beautiful.
I bought melons and peeled them and ate them as soon as I got home.
Oh, my God, it was awful. It tasted like a tasteless radish.
I was really disappointed.
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I bought a yellow melon in a traditional market a few days ago.
>> I bought a yellow melon from a traditional market a few days ago.
It looked so delicious and the color covered in yellow was beautiful.
It looked so delicious and the color covered in yellow was beautiful.
>> Correct
I bought melons and peeled them and ate them as soon as I got home.
I bought melons and peeled them and ate them as soon as I got home.
>> Correct
Oh, my God, it was awful.
Oh, my God, it was awful.
>> Correct
It tasted like a tasteless radish.
>> Correct
I was really disappointed.
I was really disappointed.
>> Correct
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