I hate nightmares.

2018-10-17 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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When I was a kid, I sometimes had a nightmares. But I become a young man, nowadays I seldom have a nightmares. As I think of my younger days nightmares, the story is about chasing me by a monster. It's scary for me as such a young days of me. Do you had a nightmares? What is about? I am curious. Thanks for asking me about nightmares or else. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you for doing your homework ^^

I seldom have nightmares, too.

They\'re scary! My nightmares are mostly about demons and monsters.

Talk to you later ☺


When I was a kid, I sometimes had a nightmares. 

>> When I was a kid, I sometimes had nightmares.

>> OR: I sometimes had nightmares when I was a kid.


But I become a young man, nowadays I seldom have a nightmares.
>> Fortunately, I seldom have nightmares now.


As I think of my younger days nightmares, the story is about chasing me by a monster.

>> My nightmares were about me being chased by a monster.


It\'s scary for me as such a young days of me.

>> It was scary for me because I was young back then.


Do you had a nightmares? What is about?

>> Do you have nightmares? What are they all about?  


I am curious.

>> CORRECT


Thanks for asking me about nightmares or else.
>> Thanks for asking me about nightmares and other stuff.


Bye.

>> CORRECT

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