I hate summer
학생이 쓴 원문
I want summer to be shorter.
In Korea,the temperature of summer season is higher than 32.
So, when we go out side more than 6 minutes,it start sweat.
One way to protect your body from sun is using sunglasses.
Sunglasses are easy to carry so you can wear anytime you want.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for answering the homework David! I am very happy of your progress in sentence construction and also your vocabulary. I appreciate your efforts and these will be good practices for you to apply what you have learned in class. Next time, please follow the instructions on the homework details. But other than that, you did good, David! :)
I want summer to be shorter.
>> Correct.
In Korea,the temperature of summer season is higher than 32.
I want summer to be shorter.
>> Correct.
In Korea,the temperature of summer season is higher than 32.
>> In Korea, the summer season\'s temperature reaches higher than 32 degrees.
So, when we go out side more than 6 minutes,it start sweat.
So, when we go out side more than 6 minutes,it start sweat.
>> That\'s why every time we go outside even for only 6 minutes, we start sweating.
One way to protect your body from sun is using sunglasses.
One way to protect your body from sun is using sunglasses.
>> One way to protect your eyes from the sun is by using sunglasses.
Sunglasses are easy to carry so you can wear anytime you want.
Sunglasses are easy to carry so you can wear anytime you want.
>> Sunglasses are easy to carry so you can wear them anytime you want.
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