I hate the criminal.
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Hi Da [이름],
Great job on your homework! It\'s very important to know what to do if you witness a crime. Taking a picture or video and calling the police is a smart move. Checking the victim\'s condition is also crucial. Remember to always prioritize safety and follow the law when dealing with crime. Keep up the good work! See you later in our class ^^
~Teacher Cathy
If i found a crime committed. Just in case, i\'m taking a picture or video, and i call the police.
>>If I find a crime being committed, just in case, I will take a picture or video and call the police.
>>The sentence \"If I found a crime committed\" is not a complete sentence because it is a dependent clause. It requires additional information or context to form a complete sentence. A complete sentence should contain a subject, and verb, and express a complete thought.
And turn up the police car\'s siren on my phone, if the thief running away, i\'ll check the victim\'s condition.
>>I will turn on the police car\'s siren on my phone if the thief tries to run away.
>>I will also check the victim\'s condition.
And if not, i take the thief because i think i have in order to stalls.
>>If the victim is okay, I will apprehend the thief because I think it\'s necessary to stop them from committing more crimes.
Crime is not good things, and i think we have to catch them.
>>Crime is not a good thing, and I think we have to stop it.
But i think the crime\'s condition is most important, so i\'ll check the victim\'s condition.
>>However, I believe that the victim\'s condition is the most important factor, so I will check on them first.
And my country has a lot of cctvs, so if i thake gppd picture, we\'ll be changing them.
>>In my country, there are a lot of CCTV cameras, so if I take a good picture, it can help with the investigation.
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