I hate to go to hospital.

2019-08-12 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

학생이 쓴 원문

I had many bad teeth when I was young. Nowadays I make it a habit to brush my teeth everyday. When I deliver the parcel I use my own car. My motorcycle is now in good conditions. No pain, no gain. Study hard. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thanks again for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great night ☺

I had many bad teeth when I was young.
>> CORRECT

Nowadays I make it a habit to brush my teeth everyday.
>> So now, I make it a habit to brush my teeth every day.

When I deliver the parcel I use my own car.
>> When I deliver the parcels, I use my own car.

My motorcycle is now in good conditions.
>> My motorcycle is now in good condition.

No pain, no gain. Study hard.
>> CORRECT

Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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