I hate using computers.
학생이 쓴 원문
In fact, I don\'t like doing something on the Internet.
I’m still used to reading paper books.
Maybe It’s because I am not young.
I am poor at using my phone, computer or machines.
If saying frankly, I don\'t want to be good at them.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
I added some terms to make the sentences more seamless.
You can check out the style.
You can adopt this style when speaking so that your words would be a little bit clearer.
Good start for the week!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
In fact, I don\'t like doing something on the Internet.
>> In fact, I don\'t like doing things on the Internet.
I’m still used to reading paper books.
I’m still used to reading paper books.
>> Correct
Maybe It’s because I am not young.
Maybe It’s because I am not young.
>> Maybe, it’s because I am not young anymore.
I am poor at using my phone, computer or machines.
I am poor at using my phone, computer or machines.
>> Correct
If saying frankly, I don\'t want to be good at them.
If saying frankly, I don\'t want to be good at them.
>> Frankly speaking, I don\'t want to be good at them.
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