I have a breakfast everyday!!
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강사 첨삭
Hi there JAE ^_^
No worries. ^_^ I do understand.
The important thing is you did your homework and you expressed your ideas in writing.
Great job! Yes, you are right. You should not give up. ^-^
I hope that you will feel better. Talk to you later.
Happy Friday and have a blast.
Teacher Nina
I have a breakfast everyday!!
>> I eat breakfast everyday.
because If I can\'t breakfast I would be weak at my work, and For my healthy.
>> Because if I won\'t eat breakfast, I would be weak at work and it is for my health,
and Having breakfast is prevent go on a binge.
>> And having breakfast prevents me to binge.
I have no idea in this topic.
>> I don\'t have any idea about this topic.
>> OR: I don\'t have an idea about this topic.
Im sorry Nina.
>> Correct!
I drank so much last night that I have an awful hangover today.
>> Correct!
But Im never give up leaning English.
>> And I won\'t give up in learning English.
Im going to work now.
>> Correct!
see you soon Nina ~~~
>> Correct!
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