I have a breakfast everyday!!

2014-05-30 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I have a breakfast everyday!! because If I can't breakfast I would be weak at my work, and For my healthy. and Having breakfast is prevent go on a binge. I have no idea in this topic. Im sorry Nina. I drank so much last night that I have an awful hangover today. But Im never give up leaning English. Im going to work now. see you soon Nina ~~~

강사 첨삭

Hi there JAE ^_^

No worries. ^_^ I do understand.

The important thing is you did your homework and you expressed your ideas in writing.

Great job! Yes, you are right. You should not give up. ^-^

I hope that you will feel better. Talk to you later.

Happy Friday and have a blast.

Teacher Nina

 

I have a breakfast everyday!!

>> I eat breakfast everyday.
because If I can\'t breakfast I would be weak at my work, and For my healthy.

>> Because if I won\'t eat breakfast, I would be weak at work and it is for my health,
and Having breakfast is prevent go on a binge.

>> And having breakfast prevents me to binge.
I have no idea in this topic.

>> I don\'t have any idea about this topic.

>> OR: I don\'t have an idea about this topic.

Im sorry Nina.

>> Correct!
I drank so much last night that I have an awful hangover today.

>> Correct!
But Im never give up leaning English.

>> And I won\'t give up in learning English.
Im going to work now.

>> Correct!
see you soon Nina ~~~

>> Correct!

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