I have a brother.

2025-06-26 · 첨삭 강사 Andrea

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I have a brother. He is a high school student, 19 years old. His favorite food is ramyeon. Actually, he loves spicy foods. But, I don\'t enjoy spicy foods, this is different from him.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kara! 

Having two older brothers is the best. 
My brothers were supportive, loving, and overly protective. 
They always treated me with so much love. 

Andrea 

I have a brother.
>> Correct 

He is a high school student, 19 years old.
>> He is 19 years old, a high school student. 

His favorite food is ramyeon. Actually, he loves spicy foods.
>> Correct 

But, I don\'t enjoy spicy foods, this is different from him.
>> We are totally opposite since I do not like spicy food. 

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