I have a chance to play...

Wow! I think you are the star player [이름]!

Congratulations! That\'s the best attitude you have.

You don\'t easily give up and you always do your best.

That\'s the reason why I know that we can reach our goal.

Just be patient. I know that you are always determined to getat you want.

Stay as strong as you are.

Teacher Nina

When I was a cadet, I have a chance to play rugby.

>> When I was a cadet, I had the chance to play Rugby.
As you know, rugby is very aggressive sport so I don\'t want to play it.

>> As you know, Rugby is a very aggressive sport so I don\'t want to play it.
however it is in our curriculum so I have to play

>> Correct
>> OR: However, it is included in our curriculum so I have to play it.
It is my worst experience about sports. because I don\'t want to play.

>> It was my worse experience in sports because I don\'t want to play it.
It is very dangerous.

>> Correct
As time goes by, I getting adapted to rugby.

>> As time goes by, I was able to adapt it.

>> OR: As time goes by, I was able to get used to it.
Air Force academy has an athletic competition in every year like Olympics.

>> Air Force academy has an athletic competition every year like Olympics.
So I participated it as a rugby player.

>> So I participated in it as a Rugby player.
there were lots of people who had wounded during playing rugby.

>> There were lots of people who were wounded during the game.
>> OR: There are a lot of people who gets hurt during the game.
So I worried about injury but I didn\'t want to lose.

>> So I was worried about having an injury but I didn\'t want ot lose.
Anyway, Our squadron went to the final.

>> Anyway, our squadron went to the finals.

>> OR: Anyway, our squadron reached the finals. 
I was key player and got goals in every game.

>> I was the best player and got goals in every game.
When the whistle was blown, We became winner of the game.

>> Correct
I almost got injured but fortunately, I didn\'t get any hurt from all of rugby schedule.

>> I almost got injured but fortunately, I didn\'t get hurt from all of the Rugby schedule.
>> OR: I was almsot injured but it didn\'t happen.
Of course, It is my best moment when I picked up winning trophy.

>> Of course, it was the best moment of my life when I got the trophy.