I have a dream.

2021-07-15 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

I am confused about what dream means here. is it a dream in s[이름]p or a dream like hope? I decided to choose a dream of hope. Therefore I\'ve had same dream again and again. Like the lyrics of a song, I have a dream. That is to teach children who don\'t receive benefits of education due to different conditions. I am sure that my dream will come true soon.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] Ha!
You truly chose well.
I am very much aware of your dream.
I hope your dream will come true soon.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I am confused about what dream means here.
>> Correct
is it a dream in s[이름]p or a dream like hope?
>> Is it dreaming while s[이름]ping or a dream of hope?
I decided to choose a dream of hope.
>> Correct
Therefore I\'ve had same dream again and again.
>> Therefore I\'ve had the same dream again and again.
Like the lyrics of a song, I have a dream.
>> Correct
That is to teach children who don\'t receive benefits of education due to different conditions.
>> Correct
I am sure that my dream will come true soon.
>> Correct

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