I have a dream

2013-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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I have a dream that one day I fluently speakig english then I will go on a trip to other part of the world. I will hunt for a bargein from the flea market in england. And I will talk about the movie that whatched on the cruise with my forign friend. And If I decide to take my friends along I will interpret for who don`t speak english. I will be sightseeing all part of the world and I will homestay at the local`s house. In short, I will be makig friends, experiencing thire cultures&eating thire food in the near future.

강사 첨삭

    Hello [이름], I am happy because you send me your speech. I hope your dream will come true. I will always be here to help you achieve one of your goal which is to speak English fluently. I am sure that this will soon come true since you are a diligent student. See you tomorrow! T. Sheela I have a dream that one day I fluently speakig english then I will go on a trip to other part of the world.>>I have a dream that one day, I will be able to speak English fluently and then I can go for a trip abroad.I will hunt for a bargein from the flea market in england.>>I will hunt for a bargain things from a flea market in England.And I will talk about the movie that whatched on the cruise with my forign friend.>>And I will talk about the movie I have watched to my foreign friend while riding a cruise.And If I decide to take my friends along I will interpret for who don`t speak english.>> And If I decided to take my friends along, I will interpret English to those who cannot understand the language.I will be sightseeing all part of the world and I will homestay at the local`s house.>> I will be sightseeing all parts of the world and I will stay in a local house.In short, I will be makig friends, experiencing thire cultures&eating thire foodin the near future. >>In short, I will make friends and experience other countries culture and food in the future.

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