I have a fear of heights.

2020-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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What can we do to confront and overcome phobias? The method will vary depending on the type of phobia. I have a fear of heights. When I go up high, I\'m leg-twisting. I know I have to get over it. But I still couldn\'t get over it. I can\'t go up high alone yet. If I want to go there, I must go with someone. I wonder if people can overcome phobias. Of course, I think psychological phobia can be cured in parallel with psychotherapy.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] Ha!
This is excellent work.
I hope you keep it up.
Everything was smooth and steady.
Good job!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
What can we do to confront and overcome phobias?
>> Correct
The method will vary depending on the type of phobia.
>> Correct
I have a fear of heights.
>> Correct
When I go up high, I\'m leg-twisting.
>> When I go somewhere high, I can\'t help but twist my legs.
I know I have to get over it.
>> Correct
But I still couldn\'t get over it.
>> Correct
I can\'t go up high alone yet.
>> I can\'t go to high places alone yet.
If I want to go there, I must go with someone.
>> Correct
I wonder if people can overcome phobias.
>> Correct
Of course, I think psychological phobia can be cured in parallel with psychotherapy.
>> Correct

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