I have a good etiquette whenever I go.
학생이 쓴 원문
I acted in a very stately manner.
Armies march in a stately manner.
The queen acts in a majestic manner.
In every situation, manner is important to us.
What do you think of me about manner?
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름]. Thank you for having the time to make your homework and I think you did a great job expressing your thoughts about manner. Keep it up!^_^
I acted in a very stately manner.
>>>I act in a very stately manner.
OR>>>I acted in a very dignified manner.
The queen acts in a majestic manner.
>>>A queen acts in a majestic manner.
What do you think of me about manner?
>>>What do you think of my opinion about manner?
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