I have a small fountain in my house.
학생이 쓴 원문
Too bad, my phone's battery runs out.
I have a small fountain in my house.
It is one meter high.
The top is circle shape.
The entire shape is same as vase.
I have not cleaned for 3 months.
It was dirty.
I and my family cleand it.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!
I knew your battery ran out because I was trying to call you back but it was not ringing. Don’t worry, I will extend our class today for 4 minutes more. Anyway, we don’t have a fountain at home but we have an aquarium.
See you in class!!
T. Shy
Too bad, my phone's battery runs out.>> Too bad, my phone's battery ran out.
I have not cleaned for 3 months.>> I have not cleaned it for 3 months.
I and my family cleand it.
>> My family and I cleaned it.
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