I have been enjoying in every weekends.

2018-05-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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Many days are passing by since I start to study english in power english. during that time, I learned a lot and enjoyed english,too. Nowadays, I am living well working for money and so on. I have a busy days nowadays. Today, on saturday, My younger brother visited me.. I am busy now, sorry. Thanks for reading.

강사 첨삭

Greetings!^^


Once again, I appreciate your sending your homework.

Catch you in class, Mr. [이름].~~


Cheers!

Jean



Many days are passing by since I start to study english in power english.

>> It has been a couple of weeks since I started studying English at Power English.


 during that time, I learned a lot and enjoyed english,too.

>> During that time, I learned a lot and enjoyed English, too.
 

Nowadays, I am living well working for money and so on.
 >> Nowadays, I am busy with work and other activities. I can say that I am living well.


I have a busy days nowadays.
>> I have a busy schedule nowadays.

>> OR: I am busy these days.


Today, on saturday, My younger brother visited me..
 >> My younger brother visited me last Saturday.


I am busy now, sorry. Thanks for reading.

>> CORRECT

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